the puppet show(the animal farm)

there was a group inschool about arts… it was about a puppet show…. martin,emilly,jhon,mika,sheryl and alvin choose the characters as animals. martin was a pig,jhon was a horse,alvin was a goat,emilly was a rabbit,mika was a puddle and sheryl was a bird…. they said: martin:hi friends wanna play pirates? mika:no. because fighting a pig is a bad idea. they asked her.. and said: martin:why? jhon:yeah, why?? mika:cause i may be a pig just like you,martin. so playing with you is dangerous to me.. emilly:who wanna play hide ang seek? mika:oh. me!me,me,me sheryl:me too! alvin:mee three jhon:me four!oh,i just love playing hid and seek.. martin:ok, ill join mika:i am not join alvin:me either sheryl:me too emilly:me three jhon:me four! martin was sad and he said to them: alright! you all are a harsh animal all are you you all are cows with big nose on a hole and un popular… and martin fell off his skin because of too much heat going to him ang he also fell down from a poop.. (that story was taken from the t.a.l.c. school in tacloban city)

What do you think ?